Karzkin

春 (Spring) The elegant cat Appears noble and gentle, But strikes with fury. 夏 (Summer) The delicate rose: Her scarlet, velvet petals Conceal vicious thorns. 秋 (Autumn) The rains of ...

This is a nice little thought, and well communicated, but this is not a haiku. Read this or message me for more details. K.

Hello there. As many have already said, well done on sharing something personal. Your resolve is commendable. The content of this piece is good. A touchy subject, but you've succeeded ...

The Nightmare Man He finds you when you're sleeping. He rattles on your door. He makes your nightmares real, He will make you beg for more. No hole is small ...

Hi :) Great piece. Fabulous message and composition. I liked the repetition of 'even with you gone'. Without the transcription (which I haven't yet been bothered to write out myself) ...

I like the revision much better. You've even improved on my suggestions. Nice work Em :)

I'm sure you don't need me to remind you how brilliant you are, but I think I will anyway. This piece is fabulous. Look what happens when you have a ...

Em, this is great! Another top effort. I particularly relished the first and third stanzas. Your little elf must have truly been an amazing creature. One suggestion I do have ...

It's easy to become lost inside the dimmed room and musty books, lit by a gleaming cigarette; a pinprick behind your eyes.

Hello there :) A good second offering, I think. An interesting topic. I think it's very easy to write with vitriol. Bitterness is a key flavour of any good poem. ...

Hi Amelia, here is my review, as promised. First, well done on attempting a haiku. I find they're rather tricky to get right. To some of the other reviewers here, ...

Spot reserved! Too busy right this second, but I'll get a review in this arvo! :D

This is great. I often eschew free verse, but I really enjoyed it. I especially enjoyed the second stanza. Some particularly inspired lines there. Great concept, and good execution A ...

Hi Em, I still love this piece as much as I did when you showed me last week. Even more so now that you've cleared up that one ambiguous line. ...

Thanks Em :) Yeah, the first line is taken from the QANTAS ad on purpose. It's supposed to make you picture the scene of those kids in white at Uluru ...