Karzkin

The poet is lost: Washed away by the torrent Of his catharsis.

Threadomancy! Your last one seems like a challenge lilymoore. Write a poem with an ABAB or ABCB rhyme scheme. The subject is the closest red object to your person at ...

"...Such money renders back In payment he who is on Earth too daring." Sweeney said to me, "A lot of words are spoken here, But not much is said." He ...

I'm a massive fan of haiku, and I'm prepared to say these are some of the best I've seen here. First, the good stuff. 1. Most of your kigo are ...

Read part I Eternal Duel He calls me out to battle, To prolong our endless war. We will fight until the end of time, ‘Til we are both no more. ...

This monologue is from the point of view of Francisco Pizarro, the Spanish general who conquered Peru in 1532. For more information, read this and this . ______________________________________________

It strikes like a thunderbolt. It falls like an anvil, With the impact of a blow from the Hammer of the Gods. It finds you - yes, it finds you, ...

Hi! A good piece, I enjoyed it. I especially liked the refrain throughout. It adds to the heavy message of the piece. The repetition of the first line at the ...

Hello! Review time. A nice idea for a piece. An interesting theme overall, but not too much information, it leaves things to the audience's imagination. There are a few technical ...

This empty expanse; Just me, the night, and freedom. "Get off the road, fool!"

The graveyard shift. The embers' vigil. Aching eyes and leaden limbs. Yet master of my domain. For, frail as I am, None can challenge me. I am alone with the ...

Thanks Em. Now I see where you're coming from. You make some good points. I agree, some lines are too long. I'll try to resolve some here: No hole is ...

Personally, I can't see anything at all wrong with the rhythm. I thought it was regular as clockwork. Seriously, two people have mentioned it now - am I blind or ...

This is a better piece than your one about the raindrops. A much better, more interesting topic. You had some really good lines in there too. Some good allusions and ...

This was nice. I could say something about punctuation, but I'm sure you can work it out for yourself, so I won't. Raindrops on the window pane is a pretty ...