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Long you live and high you fly Smiles you’ll give and tears you’ll cry But all you touch and all you see Is all your life will ever be. we ...

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Hello. I don't think we've met before. I'm here for a review. Let's get cracking. First, I would like to comment on what Fizz said. I respectfully disagree with her ...

Hello Rose. I do not believe we have met before. I am here at the behest of another, but I'm happy to review your work nonetheless. First, allow me to ...

Hello! As promised, review coming your way. First, congratulations on another submission. It's good to see you producing regularly. Now, the poems. We've spoken already briefly about the first one. ...

Spot reserved! I'll be back later.

Hello :) I'll review this one eventually. Can't do it right this second, but I will - perhaps later this evening.

Hello PollarBear! Around here I am a bit of a (self-appointed) haiku guru, so allow me to have a look at yours. First, if you haven't already, may I humbly ...

I have seen the moment of my greatness flicker, I have seen the Eternal Footman hold my coat, and snicker, And in short, I was afraid. I. Let us go ...

I'm usually not a fan of rapid-fire comments saying "this is great" and nothing more, but this has to be one of the greatest things I've ever read, on YWS ...

Oh Em, this is great :D I seem to recall you mentioning your fear of snails to me once, ages ago. While I can appreciate that this piece doesn't capture ...

Right, you asked for it :P June and Madi have both mentioned the emotional aspect, so I shan't. Enough has been said on that score. Instead, I shall address some ...

Hey Jash, your lyrics are great. However, I feel I have a few things to say about your music. It too is very good, but there is still room for ...

Hello EvensLily. I'm sorry to say, but I did not like this piece. Reasons are given forthwith: First, your rhyming. A lot of people on YWS say "don't rhyme, it ...