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Re: Love So Close
My favoyrite part was, (quoted bellow) Days and Nights, I searched in vain. Every step I took, taken in pain. Yet I feel that all this pain will yield no ...
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Re: Soulmate
touching, i enjoyed reading your poem. And yes i have lost a soulmate, but in a diffrent way. its sad to say, but it just had to happen that way. ...
Feb 19, 2009 -
Re: is it hard to say goodbye?
“This is a poem that I had composed in my thoughts when I had realized, My boyfriend is no longer around it is entitled is good bye hard to say." ...
Feb 19, 2009 -
Re: Rigth or Wrong
Hey Desmerize! i enjoyed reading you poem, it was so touching, this poem reached home and i liked. by now you should know why i am being sarcastic about this. ...
Feb 19, 2009 -
Re: Transfusion
Hi timeline, i am Karibbean Diva. Your poem was ok, but not excllent, To me it was one line it had little punctuations, A dull flood of crimson paint Flows ...
Feb 19, 2009 -
Re: Disignated Driver
:evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: :evil: I gave permission for peo
Feb 19, 2009 -
Re: Be Mine, Valentine
you my friend are talented this story was great, i was flowing, and every thing like that. the only problem i has is that i finds it too spaced out ...
Feb 19, 2009 -
Re: My Tobago
[ b]"the poem i in broken English or dialect as it is all in my country"[/b] read enjoy and feel free to give a comment i will gladly appreciate it. ...
Feb 18, 2009 -
Re: Pathless
"bravo, bravo, bravo, lyric to kill" is what we will call that in my country. i love the flow of this poem, this could be turned into a song or ...
Feb 18, 2009 -
Re: Love Poem
Firstly i mist say when i read this it touched my heart, i love it bur i wad expecting more. you should have elaborate the way you felt a little ...
Feb 18, 2009 -
Re: Disignated Driver
DESIGNATED DRIVER Dez, Trina, Kyle, Kevin, and Nigel all friends who loved to party and have fun. Trina being the oldest person in the group possessed her drivers permit, she ...
Feb 18, 2009 -
Re: Why?
What was I thinking when I entered Young Writers Society? Hmmm, maybe someone would be nice, Or even say something that would make my day. Maybe show some pity, Or ...
Feb 18, 2009
