KaribbeanDiva

Love Me Little, Love Me Long Love me little, love me long, Is the burden of my song. Love that is too hot and strong Burneth soon to waste. Still, ...

Phenomenal Woman Pretty women wonder where my secret lies. I'm not cute or built to suit a fashion model's size But when I start to tell them, They think I'm ...

hi, hi... what can i say beside fantastic writting? your writting was properly punctuated, there were a few poetic devices and everything seemed perfect. well done... I encourage you to ...

Hi, Hi... I am really sorry for sending that review twice... I am really, really, really sorry

Hi, Hi... I will get straight to the point! i didn't read your poem one reason... No punctuation whats up with that? Here is some important things to adhere to:- ...

Hi, Hi... I will get straight to the point! i didn't read your poem one reason... No punctuation whats up with that? Here is some important things to adhere to:- ...

Hi, hi... My dear, i loved those lyrics, i love the way how it was punctuated, those lyrics had rythem you were feeling the vibes when you read those lyrics... ...

Hi, Hi... Bleeding Rose your poem is really touching, but i must say it has no rythem... The following advice will help you in getting rythem into your poem. Punctuation ...

hi, hi. you have done a fantastic job... But when writing songs punctuation is key, it tells the singer when to pause when to stop etc. These are some things ...

Hi, Hi. I am Karibbean Diva, and i am pleased to comment on your work. I know that that you are a writter and that you may not listen to ...

Running away from Life by:L. Charles AKA Karibbeandiva I’ve tried to get away from life, Tried to get away from me. For a while I was successful, But it cost ...

Hi,Hi. Karibbeandiva here please to comment on your work. I really love your topic I must say! when I opened your poem i was eager to read it but i ...

Who, threw the rock, that landed, on Jim? the quote above should be: Who threw the rock, that landed on Jim? Its a question right? The rock, whose jagged edges, ...

hi,hi, I am Karibbean diva, i had liked your poen it was short and sweet. I have found a couple of issues with your poem, well i like to call ...

My bible told me to love one another, To do unto others as I would like others to do unto me, My mother once told me there is no right ...