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Kardas

  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Bacon

    This sentence although highly humorous needs to be corrected from “In the kitchen was the holy grail, a platter covered with fresh greasy bacon.” To “In the kitchen was the ...

    Sep 17, 2006
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: The Black Wolf

    I actually know quite a lot about wolves, fishr. They're beautiful, fascinating animals. I know Jodi's behavior is not typical of a wolf, but she's not a typical wolf :P ...

    Sep 17, 2006
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: The Black Wolf

    Dracchus was amazed at how coldly his co-workers treated him. In the short time he'd spent with his new mate, her affection was enough to make him forget that he ...

    Sep 4, 2006
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Bacon

    Thanks, I never would have caught that lol!

    Sep 2, 2006
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Bacon

    NOTE: This is a random, non sequitur story so don't take it seriously. Don't try to make sense of it or your brain will implode. One warm, sunny day in ...

    Sep 2, 2006
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Ode to an Omelet

    Very nice, breakfast really isn't the subject of enough poems lol the most important meal of the day at times seems to be the most underappreciated

    Sep 2, 2006
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Bohemia Island (R)

    This seems more like the lyrics of a song than narrative poetry IMO :-P Parts of it were a little gross, necrophilia isn't my thing..I'm sure you could say the ...

    Sep 2, 2006
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: The Black Wolf

    This is a short story I wrote in '04, when my writing was still weak and structureless. I've recently performed many minor revisions, and I'll fully rewrite it eventually. I ...

    Aug 1, 2006
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Silhouettes of Life

    No offense, but that made no sense at all. I can pick the hidden symbolism out of Foolie Coolie (a 6 episode anime about puberty masked as a sci-fi adventure, ...

    Aug 1, 2006
  • Narrative Poetry Re: the note

    It seemed pretty fast to me. I got the feeling that the narrator wasn't killing himself to be with his mate in the eternal embrace of death, but to chase ...

    Aug 1, 2006
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello

    Greetings all, my name is Kardas and I recently found this community on google! As with every forum I've joined in the past month, I'm here to share some of ...

    Aug 1, 2006


Fairy Tales are more than true; not because they tell us that dragons exist, but because they tell us that dragons can be beaten.
— G.K. Chesterton