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Re: Bacon
This sentence although highly humorous needs to be corrected from “In the kitchen was the holy grail, a platter covered with fresh greasy bacon.” To “In the kitchen was the ...
Sep 17, 2006 -
Re: The Black Wolf
I actually know quite a lot about wolves, fishr. They're beautiful, fascinating animals. I know Jodi's behavior is not typical of a wolf, but she's not a typical wolf :P ...
Sep 17, 2006 -
Re: The Black Wolf
Dracchus was amazed at how coldly his co-workers treated him. In the short time he'd spent with his new mate, her affection was enough to make him forget that he ...
Sep 4, 2006 -
Re: Bacon
Thanks, I never would have caught that lol!
Sep 2, 2006 -
Re: Bacon
NOTE: This is a random, non sequitur story so don't take it seriously. Don't try to make sense of it or your brain will implode. One warm, sunny day in ...
Sep 2, 2006 -
Re: Ode to an Omelet
Very nice, breakfast really isn't the subject of enough poems lol the most important meal of the day at times seems to be the most underappreciated
Sep 2, 2006 -
Re: Bohemia Island (R)
This seems more like the lyrics of a song than narrative poetry IMO :-P Parts of it were a little gross, necrophilia isn't my thing..I'm sure you could say the ...
Sep 2, 2006 -
Re: The Black Wolf
This is a short story I wrote in '04, when my writing was still weak and structureless. I've recently performed many minor revisions, and I'll fully rewrite it eventually. I ...
Aug 1, 2006 -
Re: Silhouettes of Life
No offense, but that made no sense at all. I can pick the hidden symbolism out of Foolie Coolie (a 6 episode anime about puberty masked as a sci-fi adventure, ...
Aug 1, 2006 -
Re: the note
It seemed pretty fast to me. I got the feeling that the narrator wasn't killing himself to be with his mate in the eternal embrace of death, but to chase ...
Aug 1, 2006 -
Re: Hello
Greetings all, my name is Kardas and I recently found this community on google! As with every forum I've joined in the past month, I'm here to share some of ...
Aug 1, 2006
