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I will. And there's only going to be two POVs which are Fili and Yusse. xD

>.> .< I hate it when I overlook things when I write...

Alright thanks c: The more tips, the better because I actually enjoy writing this novel. I'm working on Chapter Four right now.

I don't have a horse so I wouldn't know xD

Yeah, I noticed that I never put the time and place for the setting in the beginning of the novel. So I'm going have to tweak with it so everyone ...

I got you.

Interesting. Can't wait to read more!

Thanks for the review! I'll be sure to do all that you told me in the next chapter. I'll tag you when it's been updated c:

Thanks for the review! I should've mentioned her age but I guess I will do that in the next chapter somehow... anywho! I'm glad you like it so far. It's ...

@Querencia @sassybeatch15. Here you go, as promised.

Thanks! I'll be sure to do that. I'll tag you when the next chapter is out.

Thank you for your insight on this. To be honest, I didn't think I would get a positive outlook on this story. I got this story idea from a website ...

Pretty much. His parents used to be loving and caring in the beginning, then sometime during his childhood, his parents changed. Thank you for the review!

Yesssss.

Awesome! Can't wait.