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Will you review my fantasy novel(the first chapter)? It's called the Assassin's Redemption. Here's a link: Thanks

Could you review the first chapter of my fantasy novel. If you will, thanks.

Hey, could you do me a favor and critique this. It's my fantasy novel(the first chapter). If you will, thanks.

I could use a review right now.

I could really use some critiques right now. If any of you all will check it out, I would appreciate it.

Chapter 2 Kanen woke with a start. It was still dark out, and the moon shone brightly overhead. The air was crisp and chilly. He was in the stone alley ...

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I don't listen to music when I write my book, but for homework, heck ya. And I'll use either a pen or a keyboard depending on what I want to ...

Yeah, unfortunately, I have some good friends who do a really amazing job at finding errors. Thanks for reading. I have the second chapter written, just don't know if I ...

Well, I posted my story in the fantasy section. I really only like to write fantasy. I write in third person though I wish I could write in first. Don't ...

The Assassin’s Redemption Chapter 1 Dracon Renoir hit the rough, dusty ground of the arena, rocks carving small scratches in his hands and face. Damn Ramar , he thought to ...

Hello, my name is Chandler and I have been writing my fantasy novel, the Assassin's Redemption, for about six months now and am really looking for some advice. I'm glad ...