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Could you check out my fantasy novel? It's called the Assassin's Redemption-Redrafted. You'll probably want to skip down to my third post cause that's the edited version of it. Here's ...

Could you check out the first chapter of my fantasy novel. It's called the Assassins' Redemption-Redrafted. You'll probably want to skip down to my third post. That's the edited version. ...

Hey I was wondering if you'd review the first chapter of my fantasy novel. It's called the Assassin's Redemption-Redrafted. You'll want to skip down to the third thing I posted. ...

I want to move to England. Just thought I'd put that out there.

I'll try and get to this in later. *crit ticket*

I quite liked it. The only problem I had with it was you did a lot of telling. The number one rule of writing, at least in my opinion, is ...

Hey, if you want reviews, check out the Will Review for Food sub-forum. Here's a link:

Well, hello. I'm still kinda knew here but I can tell you this is a great site. Questions. What's your favorite book? What genre do you right? First or Third ...

I'd appreciate it if you'd check out my fantasy novel. It's in fantasy fiction and called The Assassin's Redemption- Redrafted. Here's a link: It would be best if you skipped ...

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Midnight Sensations “We are what, we are. Nothing more, nothing less” Chapter I “Ria, your parents tell me you’ve been acting up again.” Selena said in her soothing voice. should ...

Hello. Well I know that I have been searching high and low for people to review my stuff, so you all must be doing the same. Here's a couple guidelines. ...

An end to a sentence. Like a question mark. .

Were those stars? Brief flashes in the sky beyond the thin and sickly clouds appeared should it be just appear? You change tenses. so vividly even if for a second. ...

Hey, I was wondering if you'd take a look at my novel for me(first chapter) Name: The Assassin's Redemption Genre: Fantasy fiction Synopsis: The story follows the life of an ...