KanenRenoir

Here's the next part of my story. Hope you enjoy. *** Dracon ran after the two men, the arrow still protruding from his arm. If he removed it, he ran ...

Here's a link for my new forum. It's very small, but if anyone wants to check it out, you can. Link:

Hey, I was wondering if you'd check out my fantasy novel, The Assassin's Redemption-Redrafted. i have ch.1 pt. 1 and 2 post and ch.2 pt 1. You don't have to ...

You don't have to do this right now, not even this week, but I posted another part of Chapter 1 of my novel and also Chapter 2 part 1. Here's ...

I had a huge critique ready to go for you, then accidentally deleted it. So let me just say this. It was really good. You had a great attention to ...

This is awesome. I can't really say much about the errors cause all the ones I caught have already been said. Just pay close attention to your dialogue. Here's one ...

I've added more to my story and was wondering if you'd check it out. Here's a link to part to of chapter one and part one of chapter two. You ...

I posted chapter two of my novel. If you can, will you check it out and tell me what you think? Here's a link: Thanks

Hey there. Here's a critique. Being the judge and jury wasn’t enough. I needed to take up the role of executioner. I love this sentence. It's awesome! They wanted to ...

Here's the next part of my story. i just finished writing it so there's bound to be a lot of mistakes. I need a lot of advice on it, so ...

Hey, I posted another part of my story. If you can, will you check it out for me? Here's a link:

I thank you all for your comments. One thing to point out though is I know just how amazing Dracon is. He is Goliath. But what makes up most of ...

I don't believe you should tell someone what to and not to post, RubinLikes2Write. She can post what she wants. Twilight12, crit ticket. I get to it later I promise. ...

I've redrafted my story and was wondering if you could check it out. Here's a link to the first part, but if you can, I was wondering if you'd also ...

I've redrafted my story and was wondering if you could check it out. Here's a link to the first part, but if you can, I was wondering if you'd also ...