KanenRenoir

Ok, well this is one of the slowest parts I've written, but trust me it's needed. I just finished writing/typing it so there is bound to be a few errors. ...

Hey, here's a crit. I hope it helps you. Crit/advice will be in blue. note: If you've been reading the fantasy section for a while, it's possible you have read ...

Thank you all for reading this. It was in fact just a writing exercise, something to get my creativity flowing and get rid of my writer's block. I really don't ...

*** The dungeon was shrouded in darkness, with only a few small torches placed sporadically to light Ramar’s path- or the guard’s path, for they were all but dragging him ...

Thanks Hawk! The reason I figured he wouldn't wake up is because he's lost a ton of blood, so I doubt even pain would wake him.

OK. This was quite incredible. I couldn't find much wrong with it execpt: Stay in the light at all times. DO NOT leave any path, no matter what you might ...

I just finished writing this. It's really bad right now, so feel free to tear it apart. There's bound to be a ton of errors. Chapter 3 Dracon rode hard ...

I've been writing a lot of short stories to get over my writer's block and now I finally have. I just finished this and there's probably a ton of errors. ...

Yeah, really this was just something like a diary entry, just to get stuff of my chest. But I may develop it. I don't know. I'm kind of into my ...

I wrote this on a whim, just so that I could get my feelings out on pen and paper. It helped me a lot. This is unedited and not my ...

oh, sorry about that. I wasn't sure where to post it.

I wish that this site had a members only section, in order to protect the publishing rights of people. I'm just saying. Maybe one could be added.

Dracon came darting into the intersection, coming to rest at Ramar’s side. “I’m fine. I’m fine. Go see to the boy!” he yelled at his former apprentice. The man obey, ...

Ok, well, I decided to get rid of the chapter two pt two I have on here and make this that.

Tell me if you think this is too repetitive of Chapter 2. I am trying to figure out how to write this, because I think all the POV's here are ...