KanenRenoir

Thank you for the crit! :D

Okay, well, I am in the process of writing this so that I can submit it to a magazine run by the admins of another site. The theme was to ...

Okay, so I really don't have huge plans for this. Like I said, it's for a characterization camp. Basically the person helping me is giving me assignments and I am ...

Okay, so I'm working on my characterization. I did this for a character camp on another site and I figured I would post it here as well. Tell me what ...

The field was a pale green with butterflies insects and I think you mean 'butterflies and insects', and aren't they basically the same thing? I would rephrase to 'butterflies and ...

Okay, here's the next part. Again, this is not my best and has a ton of errors. Feel free to rip it apart. *** King Jairon sat at the head ...

Okay, here's the next chapter. I hope you like it. It needs some more editing and is not my best piece. Chapter 2 High Master Ramar, I am sorry to ...

Okay, well I did this for another word war. I seem to be only able to do it on this novel, and not my assassin one. This is very rough(a ...

Okay, so I decided to add more to the beginning of my novel. This is a very, very rough draft of it and needs a lot of work, so tear ...

Okay, so I wrote this for another half-hour challenge. It's a continuation of a novel idea I had had a few weeks ago, but it's way into the story, like ...

Okay, so I wrote this a few weeks back as a Half-hour challenge(you only get thirty minutes to write a story) for another site, and figured I would post this ...

Let me point out that there are actually two MCs. The girl, and the bad guy. It's fantasy, but also romance. I figured it would fit better here. The girl ...

Okay, well I got this idea for a story last night and wrote down a short blurb. Then today, I was in the YWO chat room and the people there ...

Hey, here's a crit. I hope it helps. Everything I write'll be in blue. This is the first part of a ongoing story. It is imperative that I get rid ...

Ok, here's a crit. I hope it helps. Crit/advice/suggestions are in blue. Corrections in red. Our story begins in a far away land, Oh, good God, this is a very ...