KanenRenoir

This is the first part of chapter one of my novel. I decided to do a redraft. Tell me what you think. Spoiler! : The Assassin’s RedemptionChapter 1 Dracon rocked ...

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Here's the next part of my story. i just finished writing it so there's bound to be a lot of mistakes. I need a lot of advice on it, so ...

Tell me if you think this is too repetitive of Chapter 2. I am trying to figure out how to write this, because I think all the POV's here are ...

Spoiler! : Dracon came darting into the intersection, coming to rest at Ramar’s side. “I’m fine. I’m fine. Go see to the boy!” he yelled at his former apprentice. The ...

I just finished writing this. It's really bad right now, so feel free to tear it apart. There's bound to be a ton of errors. Spoiler! : Chapter 3 Dracon ...

Spoiler! : ***The dungeon was shrouded in darkness, with only a few small torches placed sporadically to light Ramar’s path- or the guard’s path, for they were all but dragging ...

Ok, well this is one of the slowest parts I've written, but trust me it's needed. I just finished writing/typing it so there is bound to be a few errors. ...