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Re: My Sci-Fi story (good, bad?)
Very Very good, But needs some work, I agree with IMP, You need to stretch it out, instead of throwing Jack right in the middle, maybe start with: Jack woke ...
Jan 27, 2010
Very Very good, But needs some work, I agree with IMP, You need to stretch it out, instead of throwing Jack right in the middle, maybe start with: Jack woke ...
Jan 27, 2010
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