KandjaKabamba

Andy Warhol. Pop Pop Pop. Brand yourself. Exploit and distort. A dream fully realized. Observant outcast. Pop Pop Pop. Brand yourself. Reprocess, Industrialize. Package, Market. Articulate. Pop Pop Po

Sunday He was now floating, suspended high in the air tormented by the glooming hypothetical phenomena that It is. The subject returning to his perspective a number of times more ...

All in all I like the poem. The rhythm does need a bit of work. I really like the creative use of grammar and punctuation to accentuate the imagery. The ...

It's about my girlfriend by the way :oops:

Hey guys, This is my latest work, needs a lot of editing. Any suggestions? My love now my Fear! Was it real to begin with, the complete emptiness fills its ...

The poem is about the inherit Christian sacrifice that you make when you grow up in that sort of upbringing. The answers are your life experiences that lead to personal ...

I'm glad you liked it. The inspiration is in the longing of fulfillment. Embracing a void.

Equilibrium Swaying , swaying as I write and as I write I bleed. I bleed all over my page and as I bleed it soaks. It soaks and my words ...

Heya, The imagery is clear and easy to picture. I do not think that the flow is lacking although punctuation would help with where you are beginning and ending your ...

Heya, I like the imagery-it's very clear to picture this state of being. The movement is brilliantly familiar. When I think of a place between wake and rest I think ...

“It” Saturday “We’re on the verge of something big”, he declared. And, with a sombre sense of excitement Bucky replied “On the verge of what?”. Realising he had blurted out ...

I do love the mixture of syntactical style used. The flow of the sentences is very original. Although I do think that the introduction could have more information. The grammar ...

Red Jacket stalker Her piercing, deep green eyes scorned my aura. The questionable silence. Red passionate glance of etiquette. The fire and sexual intention in the contrast of her hair ...