Kanade

Hello, Penguin! Unfortunately, I'm no pro like Hannah, so I can't write a thorough review, but I hope it will be at least a teeeeeeeeeeny bit helpful :) I'm not ...

I agree wit hthe above posters, butI do understand the feeling you've put into the poem. You should paraphrase some parts of it^^ But we're mostly all amateurs here, so ...

I like the overall idea a lot. How you can't keep up with an angel when it comes down to taking someone you love. I like your poem, but I ...