Kamas

Hi bubbles Im not looking for reviews I just want people see my work and tell me whether or not they like it. I love to have an insight on ...

Another old poem that I loved... This one I feel could be so great if I got the critiques to make it better... (getting my hint here?) haha I love ...

Hi guys! I thought I'd bring this old poem back up... I really love it and its the first poem I wrote for YWS I hope to get a lot ...

Completely rewritten! Checked it out! ;)

this was really clever and witty I don't personally enjoy these kind of poems but urs makes me think twice great job! K A M A S

Ok this is really good there are a few loose ends to tighten up but its really good. The rhyming scheme goes off once and a while but the is ...