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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Dancer

    I sorrta get where you are going with this... This is a really dark poem so watch your wording The imagery you give is cold, dark, and gloomy (if that's ...

    Feb 8, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Reaper

    Ok this is really good. The rhyme is solid all the way through the subject is grim but i think its brilliant! The piece is about the grim reaper and ...

    Feb 6, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Feelings Don't Last Forever

    Ok for someone who hasn't written in a while it is really really really good. You have a pattern going but it isn't necessarily rhyme (there are some rhymes in ...

    Feb 5, 2009


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