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Re: The Dancer
I sorrta get where you are going with this... This is a really dark poem so watch your wording The imagery you give is cold, dark, and gloomy (if that's ...
Feb 8, 2009 -
Re: Reaper
Ok this is really good. The rhyme is solid all the way through the subject is grim but i think its brilliant! The piece is about the grim reaper and ...
Feb 6, 2009 -
Re: Feelings Don't Last Forever
Ok for someone who hasn't written in a while it is really really really good. You have a pattern going but it isn't necessarily rhyme (there are some rhymes in ...
Feb 5, 2009
