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Hiya Lad, this hasn't gotten enough love to my tastes. I've told you that I respect the fact you kind of go at your own pace to the beat of ...

Hey Gal, I'll keep it short because my arms hurts and you know exactly what you're doing. Thanks for finishing this c: Took some time to read up on Ramesses ...

Hi Jojo. The least you could do, if you want to write a "humorous" simple AB rhyme poem, is to actually make it rhyme. Your incredibly forceful rhyme is rampant ...

Hey Splodey. As requested. You've drowned your poem from the first line. And it just keeps sinking as we continue. "You complete me when you destroy me" is a weak ...

Hi Halycon, as requested, a quick glance over. The biggest issue I see here are your line breaks and the clarity of your thought process. Stale urine and coffee and ...

Hi Perse, I didn't get into this yesterday because chemistry folded into dinner and dinner folded into history and folded into general brainlessness. So, now I'm here! You scared all ...

Splodey, I totally forgot that I'd promised you a review! I'm so sorry for the wait. Also, don't be discouraged, it takes a while to get back into it. The ...

Hi Kafka, I heard this piece stirred undiscovered maternal-slash-paternal tendancies in some users. Nonetheless I promised to review this and planned to do so to your request of harsh, and ...

Hi Jasmine, too many for me to handle poetry wise at once, but nonetheless I'll be patient. 1. Cute, rather meaningless to the reader though. What do we care? You ...

Alright Fire, I missed your last request, so I'll try to make it up to you by reviewing this piece. Devices There's a beauty in the construction of a metaphor ...

Finally got to this Lumsters. Tried to make it encompass this piece more. There are parts to this I enjoyed reading, pushed the piece forward. Then there were parts that ...

Hey Jagged. Get some confidence girl, you seem to be capable of nailing poem after poem after poem. Post more, you know you'll get nothing short of praise because you're ...

Hey Hero, as requested weren't lying in chat about this being less than good. Very well, a review for you, to start with: You got any better quotes? Did you ...

Ladddd. I do love the edits you made to this, it subtly improves the piece and makes it quite pleasant to read. What I'd like to address with you is ...

Hai Penezenka, Keeping it short. Because you know what you're doing. You're growing to develop a much better grasp on how to work imagery, how to make it more original ...