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*I And in a trend established by liccorice, auto-correct continues to fail me.

Rework it anyway to see if there is something you can salvage. Adding something new to the mix is another possibility, as is removing something. U think it would be ...

I think it's time to change that. Rewriting and editing are integral parts of the writing process, and all traditionally-published works go through those processes. First drafts pretty universally suc

Form poetry is easy to start with but difficult to master, especially those forms with rhyme on top of strict meter, so I wouldn't worry too much about writing great ...

Consider writing poetry an experiment and try anyway. You might find traditional forms much easier to start with as those have structures you can fall back on as a base ...

Also, just saw your reply to my other review, and there is quite a bit of conflict in this still. There's the external conflict of the beginning half, of the ...

All the above are hardly conventional at this point, and subverting those tropes has become a convention in its own right. Regardless, I was talking more of conventions like "stories ...

Prophecies have a funny way of being self-fulfilling. I will tell you this: from a technical standpoint, you write far better than most, including most adults. You have the mechanics ...

I can't find youuuuuuuuu. I'm an Addleton.

And how you keep coming back to writing and posting things despite all the frustrations you've expressed.

Your actions run counter to your words.

Point = missed, and yet you managed to make it yourself. Case in point: I said nothing about a majority, and that is something you interjected into what I literally ...

It's insulting because I am not a mouthpiece for your own insecurities, and I don't appreciate being used as such. Writing is clearly important to you, and while there's nothing ...

That you have to clarify outside the poem is an indication that you didn't express it clearly enough within the poem. Satire requires a bit more effort than that. ;P

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