Kale

*sniffle* I love you. Thank you (ad infinitum) so very much for the review. n_n This is the chapter title I'm guessing? Pick one please. I like the second. Yup. ...

This chapter really needs help. ._. I don't know what I was thinking with some of the stuff I did... At least from Chapter 3 onwards, the viewpoint stops bouncing ...

This story was like one of those train wrecks you can't look away from. You know the outcome, but you just can't stop staring. I like. :3

Thanks you two. :3 Glad you both enjoyed it. I would change "aggrieved" to displeased. I intended for "aggrieved" in this case to mean troubled or worried rather than offended ...

[spoiler] Who taught you how to rhyme? Who taught you about style? Who taught you about grammar? Who taught you about consistency? Who, in fact, taught you all of these ...

@Spraynard I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for your suggestion, but I'll be keeping that last line as is. Simplicity tends to leave a greater impact, and I've never been ...

Thanks you two. :3 I don't normally write romance, and this is my first dabble into fluff, so your comments were very helpful. This could be me just being nit ...