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Re: Mixing Magic [Draft 2]: Chapter 10.2
Hello hello, and Happy Review Day! On behalf of the Knights of the Green Room , and as a representative of the Will Review for Food forum, I am here ...
Aug 27, 2017 -
Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 4.3)
And I'm back again for another part because wow do you have so many parts stuck in the back of the Green Room. Which is a shame because for the ...
Aug 27, 2017 -
Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 4.2)
And I'm back again for more! Lucky you. ;P This chapter was quite confusing, which seems to be at least partially deliberate, although there were some parts that just plain ...
Aug 27, 2017 -
Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 4.1)
And I am back for another part, it appears! And I don't really have much to say about this one because, for the most part, it read very smoothly, even ...
Aug 27, 2017 -
Re: Within my Blood (Chapter 3)
Hello hello, and Happy Review Day! On behalf of the Knights of the Green Room , and as a representative of the Will Review for Food forum, I am here ...
Aug 27, 2017 -
Re: Chapter Four (The Mate Between Brothers)
Hello again! It looks like I'm back for another chapter, so I'll spare you the introductory spiel. ;P I haven't read Chapter 3 since I'm focusing on clearing out the ...
Aug 27, 2017 -
Re: Unsafe ~ Chapter 9
Hello hello, and Happy Review Day! On behalf of the Knights of the Green Room , and as a representative of the Will Review for Food forum, I am here ...
Aug 27, 2017 -
Re: Chapter Two (The Mate Between Brothers) Improved Version
Hello hello, and Happy Review Day! On behalf of the Knights of the Green Room , and as a representative of the Will Review for Food forum, I am here ...
Aug 27, 2017 -
Re: Wonders Lost: Chapter 3
Hello there, and Happy Review Day! Before I start this review, I think it worth noting that I haven't read any of the previous parts, so if something I bring ...
Aug 27, 2017 -
Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 3.3)
And I'm back for another review this Review Day. Gotta clear out the back of the Green Room in honor of the Knights , yes? So my immediate first impression ...
Aug 27, 2017 -
Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 3.2)
Hello and Happy Review Day! I would just like to say, before I get into the review proper, that I appreciate that summary you have up there at the start ...
Aug 27, 2017 -
Re: LAPIS :Chapter 1: 3RD
First things first, I am so so so so happy that you're still working on this because oh man does it speak to your commitment to making this story the ...
Aug 27, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 15.1 - Stars in the Lockit Galaxy
Hello again. I am back for one last chapter, though it appears others have gotten to the ones in between this and the last one I reviewed. This shall be ...
Jun 26, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 12.2 - Dead as the Sea
I really don't have any criticisms for this part character-, plot-, or theme-wise. Everything was pretty darn solid in those regards, and there's a good balance between conflicts that are ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Chapter 12.1 - Dead as the Sea
Hello! It is me again! I saw that you replied to some of my reviews from last night. I haven't looked them over yet, but I'll be sure to reply ...
Jun 25, 2017