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And here I am yet again for another chapter! First thing I noticed: you need to set the texts off somehow from the rest of the story. Italicizing them is ...

And I am back again for yet another chapter. I also just noticed the date on these chapters, and I'm wondering if you recycled some old drafts or something, because ...

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Okay. First things first, this could use better formatting. Right now, the dialogue, actions, and character tags all visually blend together, which makes keeping track of who is talking or ...

There are a lot of grammatical errors in this, especially in the first paragraph, and they are incredibly distracting. The most common error is mixing up "to" and "too". You ...