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  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: American Psycho

    The book is very different from the movie. First of all, the gore is tenfold worse. Really, the movie is nothing compared to it. I really like American Psycho since ...

    Aug 19, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Voice Mail

    I liked the feeling of this piece. The main character is believable, filled with sad obsession, refusing to relinquish his hope of getting her back. I loved the way you ...

    Aug 6, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Deleted

    You're describing chaos and confusion within, an agreeable topic if ever there was one. However, it rings a little hollow in my ears. You've painted the outline, but haven't filled ...

    Jul 15, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Killing Time

    The first time I read this it didn't quite capture me. Probably because you're trying to tell a story of a henious murder without a background story to build up ...

    Jul 11, 2008
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: My brother's actually.

    This is a pretty good piece, although contentwise I think it's lacking some sort of punch or something to keep me interested. Here it's a short story, and it's just ...

    Jul 10, 2008


The human heart has hidden treasures, in secret kept, in silence sealed...
— Charlotte Bronte