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Re: American Psycho
The book is very different from the movie. First of all, the gore is tenfold worse. Really, the movie is nothing compared to it. I really like American Psycho since ...
Aug 19, 2008 -
Re: Voice Mail
I liked the feeling of this piece. The main character is believable, filled with sad obsession, refusing to relinquish his hope of getting her back. I loved the way you ...
Aug 6, 2008 -
Re: Deleted
You're describing chaos and confusion within, an agreeable topic if ever there was one. However, it rings a little hollow in my ears. You've painted the outline, but haven't filled ...
Jul 15, 2008 -
Re: Killing Time
The first time I read this it didn't quite capture me. Probably because you're trying to tell a story of a henious murder without a background story to build up ...
Jul 11, 2008 -
Re: My brother's actually.
This is a pretty good piece, although contentwise I think it's lacking some sort of punch or something to keep me interested. Here it's a short story, and it's just ...
Jul 10, 2008
