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Re: Shadow Valentine
I'm sorry, I had to drop. I can't get on very much during the day outside of school (home troubles yay) and when I check I'm 4 pages behind. That ...
Dec 1, 2009 -
Re: Save Me
This is a good rhyme scheme and stanza set up. Even with the simplicity it gives a powerful message. And even though being away from your lover seems the first ...
Dec 1, 2009 -
Re: In the Arms of the Angel: a Short Story
This was a good short story. Only one minor things bugged me. Did you intend to describe the girl's hair later on to help contrast her wings more? Cause I ...
Dec 1, 2009 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
The House of Night Novels for now. I'm tacking up more books on the list. It does to a point have an okay story, but the stereotypes make it a ...
Dec 1, 2009 -
Re: Shadow Valentine
-I'm going to have to do the same. Good luck.-
Dec 1, 2009 -
Re: Shadow Valentine
Lucy panted. She hid behind a plant some halls down. Her right arm was bleeding where she ripped the needle out of her arm when the chaos broke out. Their ...
Nov 30, 2009 -
Re: Shadow Valentine
My oh my, I do have some catching up to do. Poor Lucy.
Nov 30, 2009 -
Re: Shadow Valentine
Profile: Name: Lucy Antoinette Age: 17 Personality: Lucy is very skittish, and paranoia plagues her. She constantly thinks people are out to get her, and chooses solitude. When she developed ...
Nov 28, 2009
