Kaitlin

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Hello there! I really loved this poem--I think you avoid cheesy with the last two stanzas, so no worries. But before I get ahead of myself.. If I'm reading and ...

This was very good! It did keep me interested, and it did keep me guessing until the end. I thought it was interesting how he spent all of his life ...

I really enjoyed this poem, especially the imagery with the black guest-ghosts and the waves of the crimson dress. Just a note to watch your use of "their" and "they're", ...

I loved, loved this poem, especially the imagery. I thought the contrast of "claws and angel fingers" was brilliant, as well as the singing with the maddening eyes. The entire ...

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