Kaitlin

This is lovely. I love this. I love its complexity--I have to keep going back and re-reading, but I feel like I'm seeing different aspects of the poem each time. ...

Why hello again. Just creeping back through your poetry, and I landed upon this again and began to ponder your title dilemma. What about "Bird Bones"? Just a thought. I ...

Good! Another poem! I love that your words are broken and stained, I love the line break between "jumbled" and "like puzzle pieces". I think you might want to play ...

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I love your poetry. I love the style of this, and your imagery, and the subject, and the twist on the subject. The first stanza is gorgeous: I think "cruelly" ...

I love this short-short story (and I think that's really what it is--there's not really a plot, but things happen) and I love your writing style. I'm a huge fan ...

This was very good, and very disturbing, which is also good. I only have one point. You said: "Chuckling happily, I watched him running a finger along the most recent ...

Hello again! (I hope this is the right "turn" to correct.) I really liked getting to hear things from Kaito's point of view. He is really different from Abigail, so ...

Hi, Pink: Don't worry--it's meant to say noonlight. (Thus how at the end they're driving into blinding sunlight.) It's an arty thing--probably too arty then, if it wasn't caught. Thanks ...

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I love this poem! It really reminds me of the epic poems they used to tell waybackwhen, and I like how this really does tell a story. Just a few ...

Please, please, please don't stop writing poetry. This is brilliant. I love the language, and the halting style--it's good on the page, and when you read it out loud it's ...

Oh wow. I really, really liked this! I love the idea of everyone falling asleep and getting wrapped up by spiders except for the now mutants, and I love the ...