Kaitlin

Well, my dear, there's been some lovely critique on this--even some critique I did not fully understand! I am not nearly artistic enough for this site--but I'm just going to ...

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I love this. They have not created the adjectives to describe how much I love this. You did a fantastic job of creating new metaphors to describe your love without ...

I really, really loved this. The first time I read it I didn't entirely understand it, but that's because you have this huge block of figurative language right away. The ...

Oh, you. First of all, I have to rave about how incredibly consistent your narrator's voice has been throughout. It's the same dude--and it always sounds like the same dude! ...

I'd definitely give a piece of my soul for a review of this.

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This is absolutely gorgeous/stunning/beautiful, but if I went through and told you everything I liked about it, then this review would be longer than the story itself. So. Quickly, then: ...

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Ooooo. I like this. Or, to be more exact: I love it when people narrate instead of have dialogue--if that makes sense--and I love how your ephemeral girl talks, then, ...

I'm really enjoying this series of poems. It's a cool idea, and all your poems are gorgeously written. I read this last night, and since I was in that half-tired ...

But I like imagery! And I like all your poems. And I love this one. This actually might be one of my new favorites. Okay. First stanza: gorgeous. Coral shovels, ...

I really love this poem; especially "the hand of an angel" and "she'll be the angel that makes you her lord." Just one grammar note: With her touch, the hunger ...

I love this. I love this so much. Your word choice and imagery are gorgeous. Bravo. Here's my nitpick: my dreams leave me crying and clawing at the sweat-soaked pillows. ...

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