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Kaitlin

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    Apr 10, 2011
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    Apr 10, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Oh, Glory

    I'm so sorry. Hope things work out. This is the breaking of strongholds, the release of bondage to the heavy-laden. This is simple & therefore gorgeous. All the props in ...

    Apr 7, 2011
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    Apr 6, 2011
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Hide yo kids, hide yo wife (mustard NaPo)

    I feel like a secret agent, trying to shoot you up the list. Your poetry is fantastic, and I can't understand how you can possibly have so much to say. ...

    Apr 6, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Generation Y

    You'll be fantastic, I'm sure. Reading this, it tends to seem like you're rambling & going on and on a bit, but I read it again imagining someone reading it ...

    Apr 5, 2011
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  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Scramblings and Ramblings

    When the flesh of a beast spills God on your hands, you have to wonder how holy this can really be if gore hangs on the inside of your lips ...

    Apr 5, 2011
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    Mar 23, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Fall

    Get excited. 1. Take it out of italics. Please? I feel like if you do that it immediately makes it twice as good, but that might only be because I ...

    Mar 21, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: "Things I Don't Like" by Death

    Love-love-love-love. Lame review, I know. But that's really all I can say. Love-love-love-love-love-love. This is great.

    Mar 13, 2011
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    Mar 11, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The lost line the Road

    Is this about someone with a mental handicap? I suppose that is my initial interpretation. Mostly based off this line: “Mothafucka ge' out dis street, this our hood G” and ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Poetry Discussion Re: Alphabet Altercations

    No more do we harbor dreams of grandeur; now we sit on the porch swing in gray noon light, watching the neighbor kids ride their bikes across the cracked asphalt. ...

    Mar 9, 2011


Everything has a consequence and every consequence leads to death.
— kattee