Kairii

First off, I love the poem, it's wonderful. You have a gorgeous writing style, and you conveyed a very powerful and touching story. I really have to applaud you on ...

This is really good. I like how you used a lot of descriptions but also levelled it out so that there weren't to many. I also liked how you kept ...

Very very good job on this. Your characters are still just as lovable and real (Well, as real as a unicorn can be) as always. However, watch your transitions again. ...

This is really good. I love how she's like a normal girl instead of some mystical, enchanted, god-mod character. She's so easy to relate to and find yourself loving. You ...