KailaMarie

Or maybe have it be from mulitple POV's. I really like doing that because it seems like you can get more of the story that way. And you get to ...

You could have one of the origional characters make nicknames for the clones.

I'm really glad you posted that. I'll be sure to watch my beginnings from now on. Also, I heard somewhere that readers tend to like shorter paragraphs towards the beginning ...

I don't like to tell people unless they're my friend or they like to write too. I don't know why but I feel kind of embarrassed. Like maybe they'll ask ...

Everyone makes characters like themselves at least a little because you need to be able to connect with them. One of the best ways to make sure your characters are ...

First charactor: humble - doesn't give themselves enough credit compassionate - doesn't take enough time to worry about themself funny - again, it can just be at the wrong time ...

Well how have you started the story? Like maybe have the character know before the story starts, so the readers are introduced to it like immediately, or have some other ...

I have the same problem. I just finished my novel too and I need to edit but it's so boring! I might ask my friends to edit it for me ...

Think about their personalities, backgrounds, likes, dislikes. What makes them feel the way they do about things? How would they react to different situations? Basically, get into their heads. You'll ...

I get the origional idea from a mixture of things. Like one day I was at work and this guy came in with hair dyed really cool and I thought ...

the first sentence is interesting, but it's irrelevent. Unless your character has a love for languages or weird facts then take it out. And it sort of skips around too ...

1. At my school, we have to have gym every year, and health freshman and sophomore years. 2. Freshmen are basically treated like anyone else, except there is a "Kick ...

I like a couple things: 1. I write much better on my own computer. I can write on other computers and with paper, but it never seems to come out ...

You could also look for a name generator and then make your own deviation to go whichever way. Like if you foud a really good boy name, you could make ...

That's fun. It would be nice to have more options for the shape of the face and stuff, but that's fun. It's a time killer, though. Haha.