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Re: Jonas Brothers
I like them sort of. They are horrible actors, but I have to admit, I think their music is fun and happy. Plus they (meaning Nick mostly) are really cute. ...
Jun 10, 2009 -
Re: Who's ready for NaNoWriMo?
I did it last year on a whim, and I made like four people do it with me. Me and one of the people I made do it finished, and ...
May 28, 2009 -
Re: Post here for free...
Points! The first person to post gets 100 points, the second gets 75, the thrid 50, the forth 25, the fifth 75 again, and the sixth 25. :D
May 19, 2009 -
Re: Createspace Offer?
I'm just curious if anyone has done the Createspace thing yet, and gotten a free copy of their book. Since the deadline is coming up, I figured people might have ...
May 19, 2009 -
Re: ForEver, ForNever, ForAlways (Prologue)
Hello! I'm using this to avoid doing homework. Haha. Anyway... sandles meant for sand and surf rather then bitter Midwestern autumsn I'm assuming you meant autumn and sandals. Her throat ...
May 17, 2009 -
Re: 19 minutes by Jodi Picoult
19 Minutes is really good. Jodi Picoult really is amazing. I didn't like this one as much as My Sister's Keeper, though. I thought the ending of that one left ...
May 14, 2009 -
Re: American Idol
I actually like both of the finalists. I don't really care who wins, because they'll both do great. I sort of think Adam will because he is more consistant with ...
May 14, 2009 -
Re: American Idol
I love Kris so much. He's been my favorite it the whole time! And Heatless by him was so unexpected and origional and AMAZING! GAH!
May 14, 2009 -
Re: Who would you be?
A girl walks by, and though she is crossing her arms, she exudes a quiet sense of optimism. She smiles as she walks by most people, showing off her braces ...
May 13, 2009 -
Re: Immortality- The Prologue
Hey! Welcome to YWS! I'm Kaila, and if you have any questions, you can just PM me. It wasn't too thin either. She was small, but not sickly like the ...
May 8, 2009 -
Re: How long can a character remain nameless?
As long as it isn't really confusing and "she" isn't repeated too much, I think it should be ok. It depends on how it's written.
May 8, 2009 -
Re: Beach scene
Welcome to YWS! I'm Kaila, nice to meet you. (: I'm not going to nitpick because the others got the grammar mistakes, but as the others have said, the main ...
May 7, 2009 -
Re: Love Help...
I would say let your characters fall in love with who they are in love with. I mean, if it really messes with the plot... I don't know. Maybe change ...
May 7, 2009 -
Re: <Deleted by Author>
Hey! I'm Kaila. Ok, so onto the review. (: Welcome to Hell, where Satan goes as Mr. Moreno and pretty much everything is a piece of shit. Awesome opening sentence. ...
May 7, 2009 -
Re: Maybe I'm Just Another Fool
Hello, my name is Kaila, and I'll be your reviewer this afternoon. (: There’s not one inch of skin on you That hasn't been touched And you don't move an ...
May 7, 2009
