KailaMarie

i thought it was interesting and unpredictable. i really liked the uniqueness of it, and the ending was sad to me. i almost cried. i loved Owen, but for some ...

i loved twilight, and the whole series!!! lil dono, i think you need to give eclipse a chance. i liked it much better than New Moon. I think New Moon ...

i really liked this. It was really creative, and a cool perspective. Ever since the first ray of light that reflected off the water from the pond in which I ...

i thought this was a cool concept, and the incorrect paragraphs addd to the voice of the character. The only thing is that certain parts were a little repetitive or ...

This is the story of a selfish but quite average man, and a less-than-average girl with a annoyingly peppy personality. Priscilla was the name of the girl. She was the ...

ive read them all. at first i thought that Extras didn't have the other characters in it at all, but i liked how he incorporated them. and i cried at ...

football field--where the best of the catfights took place--, down the stairs i think you dont need the comma there, but im not good at the comma thing. lol. i ...

i think its a cute chapter. Yes, this boy belonged in the second grade haha, what boy doesnt? But one day he’ll, be wrinklier and wiser than I.” i dont ...

oooOOoooOOooohhh. that's intense. the guy in her dream she was talking to was Wiley, right? lol. “No,” I sobbed, my voice nearly out of order. “I couldn’t.” i liked this ...

Gracie. Chapter 1 I stood up, wiped myself off, and ran out from under the porch of an apartment building, ducking my head. I looked around me. There was an ...

this was good. i liked how she called her mom by her first name because it shows how informal their relationship is. to make the transition in the moving, maybe ...

i liked the prologue. it was different, and caught my attention. Jeff looked obviously, but he squirmed awkwardly. i don't really get what his reaction was. i just got a ...

this looks interesting. I didn't know Charlie was a nickname for the name Charlotte. I do like that name though. It's pretty.