KailaMarie

Reason for Writing: I like the idea of my words and characters reaching other people. I want to make my mark on the world, or at least be able to ...

Ok, I finished! Sorry it took so long, I forgot to check this thread. Anyway, anyone else need a review?

Hey, sorry this took so long for me to get to. I forgot to check my Will Review For Food thread in a long time. Ok, on to your review. ...

Sorry this review took so long, I forgot all about my will review for food thread! Anyway, I really loved this poem. I can't really review for grammar, but I ...

Some ideas for more entries could be: -Was the ending sucessful, and why? -Should Winston be considered a hero? -Talk about Winston's inner struggle -Talk about Winston's family, and Julia ...

I'd love if you could reveiw this for me. Be as brutal as you need to be. :D Thanks!

Oh! I didn't even know there was a YWS store. I want a T-shirt now!

Hey, I'm back! I smiled a polite smile as she examined what she could see of me with a catch in her breath. You say "smiled a polite smile" more ...

Whoa. Haha, crazy ending. I loved this to be honest. I only found one thing I think you might want to change. It’s refreshing compared to the harsh, stale hospital ...

It’s over. Her hair blew wildly around her head. She squeezed her eyes shut, wishing she hadn’t had to say what she just did. He put his hand on her ...

I really liked your writing style. However, I agree with Jetpack that this plot is really cliched, and that we need to feel more attached to your characters. I'm not ...

I've done multiple POV's a couple times and I think it helps you and the reader get to know your characters better when you have to actually think from their ...

These might have been said already, so sorry for repeats. You know you're a writer when your keyboard is starting to get worn out (true story). You know you're a ...

One time I picked up my phone and it was my brother's friend. And I didn't know how he got my cell phone number but he was cute, so I ...

Every morning after I brush my teeth. If I do it before, he complains about my bad breath. Do you wish you could fly?