KailaMarie

We cuddled on his futon, me sitting on his lap, and his strong arms wrapped around me. We were watching James Bond, and the love interest of the moment was ...

that's a little scary. 7/10

I like emo. I'm not really myself, but I listen to a lot of "emo" bands that I really like. I don't like stereotypes generally, but this is more of ...

like everyone said, you captured Steph's style really well, but one thing I saw that didn't fit in well with the actual books, was that Bella didn't seem that opposed ...

And in the book, she was younger, and called her parents mother and father, I think. don't call then Mama and Daddy, especially if she's supposed tobe the maturity level ...

I love the ending of this. It was perfect. BUT there were a few little nitpicks about gesters and kind of how they reacted to each other like, I gulped ...

-pokes with stick- write. And bravo for planning everything out. I've tried outlining, and I just can't do it. I think it would help speed along the process, but I ...

-laughs- "That's a funny way to think of it." -Matt "Those people are weird. That's not what it comes from, it would just be that when someone makes a point, ...

Something with a main character who is stressed, and overly busy, but something tragic happens to him/her that makes them take a second look at their life, and prioritize things ...

(hospitals) "Oh crap!" the yelled, realizing he had spilled the container on the counter, causing the fecal contamination alarm to sound. (I think this is how you're supposed to do ...

i was trying to work on my book, but i got bored, because i was having a little writer's block, so i was looking up some creative writing tips online. ...

conducting a sexual relationship this sounds too formal, I think. You should just say her daughter was having sex with an 18 year old. or however you want to put ...

Because they're painted amiles are friggin' creepy. Do fingernails or toenails grow faster?

Overall We had moved in three days ago, yup that’s right moved right in the middle of no where, Fallston Maryland. i would make this two different sentences. "We moved ...

i saw it for the first time the other day, and they have the best romantic quotes, cuz they're adorable and origonal, but not cheesey like Jerry McGuire. like "If ...