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Re: A Lost Soul (working title) - Chapter 1
Sorry it took me so long to answer. I haven't had time to go online in a long time! (Even now I should be doing homework! Haha.) Anyway, on to ...
Sep 14, 2009 -
Re: Love is blind
Hey! I'm Kaila, and I will be your reviewer for today. Overall, I liked it, but I have a few things to suggest. First of all, you mention Mary twice, ...
Sep 14, 2009 -
Re: First new lounge post!
I missed it here! I'm happy-dancing on the inside! (Only on the inside because I'm supposed to be doing homework right now.)
Aug 23, 2009 -
Re: YWS Down For A Week: What Will You Do?
I think that's the week I have driver's ed. And I'll be working. But really, I'll just be crying on the inside.
Aug 4, 2009 -
Re: I Promise But I Lie (2)
Two and a half months earlier “Danny! Oh my God, Danny, we’ve hit the jackpot!” Tyler bellowed hoping over the counter, landing right next to me. I looked up from ...
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: I Promise, But I Lie (1)
The guy in front of me leaned back again, bumping into my knees. I looked over at Bailey and rolled my eyes. She leaned her foot over and nudged his ...
Jul 31, 2009 -
Re: Nw story, need help please!
Hey! It's me! ...Kaila... right. Anyway, onto the review. My first thought is make it shorter, and you'd get way more people reviewing it, I think. It just seems like ...
Jul 28, 2009 -
Re: Bella's 30th Birthday
This is pretty good. I liked how you made it so that she ended up with Mike, that was really unique. But I think the whole Jacob thing is a ...
Jul 28, 2009 -
Re: I Want You -points finger-
All done. Anyone else?
Jul 26, 2009 -
Re: Let Me Love You(10)
Hey! I'm here to review! The heat radiating off of him made her jump on the inside. It seems weird to jump on the inside because he's warm. Jumping seems ...
Jul 26, 2009 -
Re: Do you prefer to type your stories or write them by hand?
I like to type them because it seems more official and it's easier to edit it. Plus, like other people have said, my hand gets tired before my mind does. ...
Jul 26, 2009 -
Re: Edward and Bella
Well, I thought to myself, better get to sleep. I woke up in the morning, with my cuts stinging. Time for school, I thought. This was going to hurt. Ok, ...
Jul 24, 2009 -
Re: My YWS Birthday
As of July 15th I've been on here an entire year! YAAYY! Just wanted to say that. :D
Jul 23, 2009 -
Re: Help Me Decide (New YWS)
I like the blue better. It makes me feel happier. :D But that's porbably because that's what I'm used to. And although I like the footer on the black one, ...
Jul 23, 2009 -
Re: What will you do in this situation?
That's happened to me, but I don't get up. I just write down the idea so I don't forget and then ignore it as best as I can and go ...
Jul 22, 2009