KailaMarie

I didn't look over at Jason when I answered. I just kept wiping the counter, and whispered out of the side of my mouth, "I'm not really sure. I think ...

I liked the idea of being able to ride on the camel. I was getting a little dizzy. I mean I'd hit my head pretty hard. "Hold me up," I ...

I pretended to not pay attention to the situation. Always act innocent. That was my motto. I had big eyes that always seemed to help when I put on an ...

*I think it was supposed to be Heather. Just put yourself in. Like be someone on the street that walks into the coffee shop or something. Or one of your ...

Oh, I like that idea. And you're right, we need more bad guys. I could feel my character going bad if we need to.

Carmen: I stood at the counter of my minimum wage coffee shop job, looking overly bored. I only took it because there was a great view of the river. Sure ...

My ribs hurt so much that it was tough to stand, but I wasn't going down without a fight this time. However, as Sydney, Zire and I prepared to defend ...

I just edited this, so I hope it's better! (: But a rip-apart critique is welcome. Haha.

I just edited this, I hope it's better. (:

8/10 It's cool. I like black and white.

Like when a crime has been commited, you say "The police are looking into it." But it's a hole, so they are literally looking into the hole, but also they're ...

Hahaha. 10/10 I love bubble wrap!

Loose every sports game. I usually do anyway. Haha. Would you rather have tons of spam email or telemarketers always calling your house?

Carmen is up for love too, if anyone needs someone. I don't think there's enough guys to go around, though, so I don't need a love interest. I'm just saying. ...

There was a silence after the sound of the trees stopped moving from Nokie's escape. My eyes were watering up from pain. I hoped my nose wasn't broken, but I ...