KailaMarie

I hope this isn't too confusing. Please let me know! **** Heavy footsteps clunked through the foggy streets leaving wet boot prints in their wake. Cam walked away. He just ...

I love when love stories are a little awkward. It's so cute!

After Trent changed, I followed suit. I couldn't keep up without running, but it felt indescribable to finally be able to stretch my aching muscles. I wished there was water ...

Hey, Billy, since Carmen and Jason are friends anyway can I claim him? :D

There were a couple people on the train but we could easily find enough space for all of us to sit near each other. I made sure I got into ...

Whatever gives you ideas to write is perfectly fine. Some people like to outline, some people come up with characters first, some people do mixtures of things. If coming up ...

Carmen: I stared Jason in the eyes for a minute, trying to make my decision. The almost laughing cries of the hyenas were enough to make the choice for me. ...

Aww, my review isn't the first anymorw... it was when I first started writing it... Oh well. everyone else was faster.

Hey! First review! Whoo! Haha, hope I can help. First, nitpicks: I laid my head against the cold desk’s top. I would think that should say "desktop" or "desk top" ...

Chocolate, or to be specific, a Frosty from Wendy's. Oooohhh, a frosty sounds good. (:

But when you self-publish, how much can you really promote it anyway?

1) Get all A's in school (not likely with my teachers) 2) Finish and finish editing the novel I'm working on by my birthday (March 1) 3) Go to the ...

Outside the rusted, iron gate looking into the abandoned manor, I stood and looked up at it. This sentence seemed a little awkward to me, I would try to rephrase ...

Sorry it took me so long to get back to this, I don't check my guestbook thing often, so I just noticed the comments you left. "Are you ready, love?" ...

Yeah, or maybe legally blind, like just have really bad vision without huge, thick glasses.