KailaMarie

Here's a link of super powers I looked up one time for something I was writing. It's really useful actually. I'm not sure about the last name, I'm not very ...

This one is very vaguely sci-fi, but only because there is a little bit of time travel in it. It's mostly a love story. If you don't want to review ...

I would like these to be reviewed if you don't mind. Be as harsh as you want to! (:

10/10 That's so cool!

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If I were you I would cut down a whole lot on the intorduction. You don't need to explain all of this, and it was so long, that at first ...

I loved how different this was. It was very repetitive in some places, but it worked because your main character was thinking like that. The feminine features were standing out ...

This is the first part of a three-part short story. I'd really appreciate a review. (: Edit: I changed my mind. I have a lot of work to do on ...

Could you look at this for me? There are going to be two more parts to it, but I don't want to post them all at once because that'd be ...

I have to edit this a lot, I changed what I was doing, so this isn't the final draft. Feel free to still comment, but I have a lot of ...

I have tried it, but I never seem to have the notebook with me when I come up with an idea. And even when I do have it with me, ...

I think she got it at or something like that. I can ask her if you want. (:

Number 2 is my favorite and I'm glad I have the permission to do so. (: And I would add: -First drafts are horrible things. And that's good. -Don't ever ...

There are so many! Which ones are really useful?

I look at many books being published today by adults, and I know I'm better. It's that simple. Age shouldn't matter; it's the talent that is what makes us authors. ...