KailaMarie

Sorry I haven't checked this for a while. I'll get to it all as soon as I can!

First charactor: humble - doesn't give themselves enough credit compassionate - doesn't take enough time to worry about themself funny - again, it can just be at the wrong time ...

Pat Buchanan is basically just an option on a lot of polls here. It's a fun other option... I think?

I Pat Buchanan. And sometimes YWS.

I sat in the tree, listening to the soft breeze and the quiet rhythm of people's breath. It was a clear night and the breeze was relaxing, but I couldn't ...

Well how have you started the story? Like maybe have the character know before the story starts, so the readers are introduced to it like immediately, or have some other ...

That's ok, I'll give you points anyway for being generous. (:

I'm not very good at critiquing pictures, but this is really well done. I like the lips especially. I would suggest adding an ear since he doesn't have hair. And ...

The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

Ok, I finished all of them! Any more? (:

Sorry this took so long, I've been really busy, but I finally found some time. (: I really like the opening line. It makes me curious and want to keep ...

Sorry this took sort of a while, I've been really busy lately, but I finally found some time. The other one was standing besides the man Glinting in the weak ...

Sorry this has taken a while, but I'll get to those soon. I did the second one for Winter's Twelfth Night.

It felt good to be able to ride on Trent's back, especially with Jason right next to me, but I was still sort of freaking out about the whole hunting ...

"No problem. It all worked out, right?" I winced and looked down at my leg, then looked around the expanse of woods around us. "Sort of." I laughed because it ...