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Re: Mothers and Sunday Mornings
Waking up on lazy Sunday mornings I would hear you, my brother, and my sister whispering in the other room, trying not to wake me. Maybe it had been an ...
Mar 18, 2009 -
Re: I need help with characters
You could have one of the origional characters make nicknames for the clones.
Mar 17, 2009 -
Re: Presenting... Your Story
I'm really glad you posted that. I'll be sure to watch my beginnings from now on. Also, I heard somewhere that readers tend to like shorter paragraphs towards the beginning ...
Mar 17, 2009 -
Re: The Writer Incognito
I don't like to tell people unless they're my friend or they like to write too. I don't know why but I feel kind of embarrassed. Like maybe they'll ask ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: I Want You -points finger-
Ok, I'm all updated except for Lord Anzius. I'll get to that one as soon as I can. (:
Mar 14, 2009 -
Re: You kept me alive
I absolutely loved this. It was creepy but really well written! Great job. I don't have anything you should improve on except in the beginning all the "he" and "him" ...
Mar 14, 2009 -
Re: Phoenix Saga chapter 4 Death becomes him
Sorry this took so long to get to, I've been sick. So let's get started! Nitpicks: “Or is it the smartest,” he countered The comma should be a question mark ...
Mar 14, 2009 -
Re: Contest for Young Writers Only: Get Published and Win iPods
Thanks for pointing this out. I might enter.
Mar 14, 2009 -
Re: Creating a Story
Well what kind of stuff do you like to write about?
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: He's not quite ready
It's standalone. I'm not planning on writing more around it, but who knows?
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: Social Networking Getting Old?
I have a myspace and a facebook account, but I almost never go on myspace anymore because all my friends have facebook instead.
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: Too Much of Myself
Everyone makes characters like themselves at least a little because you need to be able to connect with them. One of the best ways to make sure your characters are ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: Writing for a living: a job or a chore?
My plan is to be an elementary school teacher because I love kids and for other reasons too, but a huge plus to that job is that you get a ...
Mar 7, 2009 -
Re: insert coin
You get a lamp that looks like an elephant. -insert coin-
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: What was going through your mind when...
Haha. I do stuff like that too. Like one time I was hanging out with my friend and this guy I liked and he said something wicked sweet to me ...
Mar 6, 2009
