KailaMarie

I really like that. It tied in the beginning to the end of the paragraph, and it made me wonder what was so important about the hotel to begin with. ...

Pat's winning!!

So it doesn't have to be a poem a day, as long as there's thriy poems? Because I lost the second day if it HAS to be one a day... ...

Lee The guys didn't know that I'd stayed in the room with them, since I'd turned invisible during all the comotion. Jack sat on his bed, his head in his ...

I absolutely love the beginning two paragraphs!! adopting the disappointed feeling one gets when one is let down, This seems a bit redundant to me. People usually are disappointed when ...

First Story: I liked it a lot. I liked how rushed it was. I would almost like to get attached to the characters more, though. I would have liked to ...

This made me go "AWWWW!" Hahaha. This is beautiful. I felt like this line doesn't fit, though: And I swear that I will find you I'm just wondering why she ...

It might mean how everyone says to show not tell, like Rosey said, but if you need to put a lot of information in a prologue or something, that's a ...

Screnzy sounds cooler, but I'm doing NaPoWriMo. And yay for April!

Pat!

To my: Baby doll in Converse who loves coffee but won't eat eggs. Rock in work boots who eats breakfast religiously. You're the only: Girl I would ever watch Gossip ...

Both. I concur.

I'm back again! Ilani was nothing more than a coward, a poor commander, a failuer. It's spelt "failure" For a person who didn't know Aram, which was quite rare inside ...

Ok, I'm all caught up! Anyone else?