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Re: Drew
Hmm. This part of your novel is practically the equal of a filler chapter. It doesn't have much action, but it's still a good one in terms of explaining the ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Peacekeeper
*Glares* You know me, Samp, and I know you. The question is, why are you using Ridux Aeon's character(and not mine)? *Smiles* Lol nevermind. I KNOW WHERE YOU LIVE. Don't ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Daddy, Where Are You?
Hey, great work. Keep at it. Have you considered a career in poetry?
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Chapter 1
Ok... A bit too much mushy stuff for me, but the action and description are good.
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Kill, or be killed
Great story you have here. A noticeable lack of spelling and grammar mistakes, and good action scenes. Hope to see more of this stuff.
Jun 29, 2011