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Re: Story 6 (Part 1)
Alrighty, first things first let's scan for any errors. Get the nasty work out of the way. Today I shall be correcting with this purple colour. Deep, chocolate eyes that ...
Oct 8, 2011 -
Re: New Age Thumbelina
Soothing music filtered toward me from all around, the whistling wind coming in from the mountain, the “shh shh shh” sound of the wheat crashing together around me, and the ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: New!
Welcome welcome welcome, welcome to the site. Welcome welcome welcome, hang your coat up on the right. Welcome welcome welcome..... *think* .... ok ok, I'll stop my song...mostly because I ...
Sep 24, 2011 -
Re: Ahoy!
Hey Hey Payne, the resident person-who-shoots-poisonous-snakes-with-a-machine-gun. Quite a snazzy title you got for yourself there, If I happen to find any poisonous snakes lurking around on my profil
Sep 24, 2011 -
Re: Crossroads [Chapter 1]
After reading the chapter I noticed a few errors that I'll point out. being back in the countryside was not so much fun as she had expected. The sentence may ...
Sep 24, 2011 -
Re: Ahoy!
Hey there :) As you can tell from my name, I'm Kaiex though feel free to call me Kai...but anything works really. I'm an 18 year old from england. I ...
Sep 24, 2011 -
Re: Struggling
Such a sad poem and yet beautifully written. The emotions in the poem really stand out to the reader and make it easy to understand that the person who's point ...
Sep 23, 2011
