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Re: Ur'Ites
I have updated it as far as I possibly can right now with my computer on the fritz. If you like it right now, there is a lot more coming, ...
Sep 27, 2007 -
Re: Ur'Ites
THIS WAS TAKEN DOWN UNTIL I GET THE ORIGINAL BACK. I WAS SUPPOSE TO TAKE IT DOWN FROM ANY OTHERWEBSITE BECAUSE THIS STORY IS BEING USED FOR SOMETHING. IT WILL ...
Sep 27, 2007 -
Re: Lost Innocence
W.O.W that was an intense poem. I thought it wasn't going to be as good as it was. I mean, rape is terrible, but described in such a way, it ...
Sep 27, 2007 -
Re: Dead
Emily didn't read the rules! *pokes you with a fork* You've got to critique at least two things before posting your own work. ¿Comprende? *goes to hunt for the link ...
Sep 27, 2007 -
Re: Harry Potter fanfic (from epilogue)
I liked this very much, but i do not like the use of "Rosie" repeatedly in the beginning few paragraphs. The plot was original, but not bad in the way ...
Sep 27, 2007 -
Re: Unfulfilled
Interesting. I think that all in all it was excellently written. In the ending, the "I know." I wonder if it could be written as "It is understood." Separation and ...
Sep 27, 2007 -
Re: Dead
Wind and Rain Always falling People running Never calling Chilly heat An even death "Who is there?" With his last breath. He called aloud, Fear of Pain Watching Blood Fall ...
Sep 25, 2007
