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Re: Her Hearts Greatest Fear( Prologue)Rewrite
Well dang. I know a lot of situations end up like this. Ah to heck with it, most situations end up like this, at least that I've noticed, when a ...
Sep 1, 2009 -
Re: Wolf
Wow definitely better than I can draw. I really like the shading you've done. I think you could put a little more emphasis on the snout, because that is usually ...
Sep 1, 2009 -
Re: I always thought that ...(this game would be nice)
I always thought that paying too little attention to the road created studpid people.
Sep 1, 2009 -
Re: I Give You A Curtsy
Well, I can sort of relate to this I suppose. I mean, I know I've been called several things before, and that has mostly me tell myself pathetic. I really ...
Aug 31, 2009 -
Re: Too Late-8/31/09
Every time I see her face, I want to punch a wall, I want to harm, to hurt, and bleed and make her suffer more. I want her to feel ...
Aug 31, 2009 -
Re: Call me Ishmael
Um, for a start, "Call me Ishmael" came from Moby Dick by Herman Melville, so you may want to fix that. This seemed to end rather abruptly, I don't know ...
Sep 11, 2008 -
Re: Thicker than Water
Well, I liked it rather more than I had initially thought I would. To me the middle seemed rather rushed. There could have been a lot more going on before ...
Sep 7, 2008 -
Re: A Vampire Story CH.1
Wow. That was an interesting story. I do hope there is more, because there isn't much to go on otherwise. But I liked this story. It had a ring of ...
Aug 29, 2008 -
Re: Anatomy
Interesting. I got some random thoughts flittering in my mind in the middle of that. It's intriguing to me, thought I can't say particularly why. However, I did enjoy this ...
Aug 29, 2008 -
Re: Sam (Standing Title)
Hmm. Not Entirely sure where this is going. It's a good start to whatever it will be, very up-to-date with world news, though, and I like that. the term "OK" ...
Aug 28, 2008 -
Re: My Final Goodbye
Your words keep coming out, echoing in my mind, and hypnotizing my thoughts, taking control of my mind. This vulnerability of mine causes one of my biggest downfalls, but for ...
Aug 27, 2008 -
Re: I look but do not See
I sat there, watching nothing in particular, the noise of rain pit-pattering on the glass of the window. They said my eyes looked glazed over, like I was just coming ...
Aug 12, 2008 -
Re: The pain of someone leaving returns
Is it so strange to be angry when someone leaves you? Is it so strange to want to have them stay? The pain that comes with a person leaving is ...
May 18, 2008 -
Re: Sorrow
Glad you liked it.
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: The Book and Its Writer
What are the worm like things? The only other gripe I have is that the last line doesn't make any sense... The first ones were fingers, the second ones were ...
Apr 17, 2008
