Kaibusu

it's a good piece but can be confusing in parts...

to make it better you could move the left arm so its positioned more realistically your left not hers. but it does look great dont get me wrong

it looks good, all i see that you could change to make it better is the shading of the nose into a different position, it looks a little crooked

i think the way i posted it made it like that with the paragraphs...sorry, i'm new to this lol. But, you said the voice of him is confusing, could you ...

scan0001.jpg Chapter 1 There was danger behind me; I could sense its presence. But I couldn’t evade it, there was no time. The tip of a blade pierced the front ...