Kaia

Might take a bit, but I'm up to the challenge. :D I'll just keep working on Jaith's description. ;) Eventually I'll get there. I mean, hey, Shiko and Zybryn were ...

Okay, it dropped out all the punctuation and added random stuff...Good to know that I should drop out the punctuation beforehand. ;)

Hi, Mercedes! Thanks again for leaving a beautiful review. Some of that which you mentioned I didn't even really think about, lol. It just sorta happened. ;) To answer your ...

Hi! Thanks for another review! Very helpful stuff in there! I'm so glad you liked how I did the explanation part. I was worried it went on too long. So, ...

Hi, Mercedes! Thanks so much for the review! It made my day. Recently, I have been having my doubts about the worth of Rehenowa as opposed to my previous works, ...

Thanks for posting chapter 2! :) I'll post three when I get the chance. ;)

You, too!

Heyo! Thanks so much for the comments and critiques. Well...You certainly hit on the critique I recently realized was a problem-the pain. Yep. I didn't put enough places showing that ...

Hi, Rinisha! I missed that part about the older brother. *slaps forehead* I must have forgotten. Oh, well. I understand now. ;) Hm. I got confused...That's okay, though. i'm sure ...

:)

Oh, I forgot to there a part three that's out yet?

One more thing I just noticed. You misspelled "angels" in the quick one-liner about the story. I like to think of it this way: The word "angel" has the word ...

*Edit. I didn't realize you'd already addressed the fact that you don't want to continue it. Sorry. I didn't read every one else's reviews before I did my own. All ...

Hey, Mercedes! No problem. I was able to pick up a few points to post, so that's always nice. :) Glad to be of assistance. Yep. I hear that a ...

That's a really good idea to include how to pronounce stuff in the first chapter. Smart thinking! (It's YAWsh-ah-gaw-mee, tho, right? Not yash like rhyming with rash, right?)