Kaia

Wahoo! The quoting worked!

Well, I would most definitely say that it's debatable on whether or not to have long chapters. I tend to think the best thing to do is to have short ...

Thanks for the thoughts. I'll have to look into that. :) You're awesome!!

Absolutely! Have a great day!

Hey, Rinisha! Kaia here. Just wanted to say thanks for reviewing our book. Put all the credit on @MercedesBlue. She did most of the writing here, and of course she ...

Hi, Mercedes! You hit on a lot of good points. Thanks for telling me where you were confused. I will go back through this and try to fix it as ...

Hi, Mercedes! Yeah. ;) I don't think I mentioned that before. But, yeah. That's how Leo has the same last name as Rushita's family. I know a LOT about family ...

Hey, Rinisha! No problem about getting to it late. I've also been busy. I should have more time to work on Rehenowa soon, but this week might end up a ...

Took me a bit to understand the code up there, but I think I get it now. ;) Yes. There are Trustissues. Well, I keep the whip on Thing's back, ...

So glad you liked THE Chapter 9. So, yes, a little conflict has been brewing behind Leo's watch between those particular two cousins. It is only a guess to see ...

Excellent review there, cookiesandcream123. I'll post the next chapter as soon as I get the chance. The hyphens is a mistake. I need to go back and fix that. The ...

Absolutely. Glad to help out a fellow writer. ;)

I like how your comments are getting longer. They're also so helpful. Thanks! Ramien is my favorite, too!

Thanks, girl!

Version 1 of that scene made it a bigger deal. I'm probably going to go back and make that more of a bigger deal so readers don't forget. ;) I ...