Kaia

Daaaannngggg....I didn't even think of that. But that is definitely reasonable explanation (Um, you didn't see me say that, of course I thought that out...) Good point about the descriptions. ...

Ha, ha! I noticed. Interesting. It's totally fine to not have made up your mind yet. It took me a while to decide on my favorite. (I should have figured ...

Hm. Okay... Maybe try opening that up with the fact that the conversation easily yielded to a mental image or something like that. I'll let you know if I have ...

Okay. Will do. :) Okay, that makes sense! Thanks for explaining that! :)

Hm, yes. A lot of conflict is going. I'm really trying my best to write natural dialogue, so thanks for telling me that you think I'm doing a great job ...

Hey, DreamyAlice! Nice to hear from you! I love your thoughts. They bring me much inspiration, so please keep reviewing if you have the inspiration and time to do so! ...

Glad to hear my suggestions will be helpful! Ah, okay. That makes a lot of sense. And just a tip: one of the easiest ways to establish historical setting is ...

Yep, and then they need to know what to expect!! Good job writing!

You're welcome! I might check that out. Thanks! I figured it was just coincidence. I was just being silly, lol.

Good tip. I'll keep that one in mind. ;)

You're welcome! Your short chapters are awesome! Don't worry about that. ;)

Hi! Thanks so much for stopping by to leave a review. This means so much to me!! I'm really happy to hear that you like my writing style, as it ...

I've have to check it out. Thanks! :)

Sure! Glad to be of assistance.

In case you got confused...I cut this chapter in half. The other half is in editing confinement currently. ;) I will probably post it after Review Day.